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請試著將下列文句改寫成譬喻法並且拉長的敘述方式,讓文句更為生動、活潑。
範例:烏雲籠罩著天空
魔術粉加形容詞è一大片的烏雲籠罩著天空。
魔術粉用譬喻法è一大片的烏雲籠罩著天空,好像張牙舞爪的妖怪,直向地面撲來,
令人膽顫心驚,不得不加快腳步。(魔術粉:加動作、加想像、加誇飾)
請你跳過步驟,直接寫出完成後的句子,要多加修飾、注意美感,不要太幼稚或口語喔!
1.窗外下著雨
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2.我的心情
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3.青春
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4.挫折
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5.【___________________________________________】題目自訂
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